Tales of The Gods' Slayer: Rise of The Uncrowned King

"Have a seat and tell me more about yourself, i need to know you" Abigail said while joining Gene in the couch.

"Tidak apa-apa sayang. Kami hanya sedang berdiskusi mengenai meeting yang akan kami hadiri sebentar lagi. Bukankah tidak baik membicarakan pekerjaan sambil makan?"

Me:I am the founder of the hunters but they got stupid and I am a werewolf

I can't read this. I don't even know how to say this but it felt very dull to read  almost like a computer type this up or something. as it just felt like when reading this the story's way of describing things with like no life to the description. then there was things that the main character would talk about that make no sense.

Rather interesting story that suffers a lot from poor writing quality. Story would benefit a lot if it followed the standard dialogue format instead of this abomination that it currently has. It also has wrong spelled names and misused pronouns that is pretty common in this platform. Anyway if you can get past those story has potential.

A really good piece of literature with every details written which makes it more interesting and enticing, im beginning to get hooked and I'm expecting our daily 2 chapters

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