I actually quite enjoy this novel. From the characters, their various interactions, the world building, even the sometimes questionable and overly mysterious plot. Author also does well in regard to not neglecting the harem members despite their continued growth in number, they each have a unique charm that sets them apart from one another. My main gripe with this novel is in how the author refuses to advance the MC’s Order. Anyone familiar with this genre have all read novels where the MC would be stagnant at a single level for dozens if not 100-200 chapters, but at least the reasons given were understandable and weren’t worth harping over. Here, that isn’t remotely close to being the problem as the MC advances by means of XP. The issue here is that it’s been accumulating for hundreds of chapters and the MC advances at a snails pace or not at all even if the situation calls for it. He can be facing death and rather than use the XP he has to perhaps make a last ditch effort, on several occasions he has just accepted the fact that he may just die. Isn’t that absolutely ridiculous? At this point, it’s clear that the author is just using this as a plot device to introduce more challenges to the MC and increase tension, but it’s done poorly and feels forced every single time. The initial excuse was that the MC wanted to refine his powers before advancing, then after a time it changed to him not arousing suspicion from others if he were to advance too fast. Previously, that made sense, but as of now when he should(author somehow always manages to introduce someone who can threaten his life every few dozen chapters) have no equal outside of the Main Continent, those reasons no longer matter. As of late, I had hope that he’d finally start utilizing his XP and advancing because apparently he can easily reach Peak 6th Order and it was stated that he’d start being less cautious, but not even a dozen chapters later and he almost dies once again. The author may as well be treating his readers as a joke at this point with such a glaring flaw in the story that has not been addressed after so long of many people pointing it out. Still a good read, but prepare yourself to be frustrated to no end when this type of situation continues to occur.
Everything is near perfect, why it isn't perfect is that nothing is perfect but this novel is close to it. Writing is of top quality and you can really immerse yourself with this story. I recomment this story to everyone, even if you dislike an evil main character. I will definetly keep on reading as long as you keep those juicy chapters coming!
hey author and new readers seeking to read this novel, I ll give you a pros and cons of the novel. pros :- 1.the plot is interesting, intelligent. to better make yall understand, you can compare the plot type with the type of plot world apocalypse online has and the ancient genes. 2. the power system is unique and author explained it well. easily understandable and exciting. 3. side characters have a proper role and are growing, mc's backing does a proper job of backing him rather than in some novels where mc has to leave cuz he cant bring his backing into trouble. 4.the writing is fun. author has inserted humour in between. and he knows how to hype.cons :- 1. the story is incredibly slow. 2. mc's power development is near negligible. although he has such a good legacy, as you've seen in majority of comments and I ll mention it too, I hv read it to around 350 chps and MC. is. still. VERY. weak. Unlike WAO and the ancient genes, mc's power development is too slow, even this far into story he is just on 2nd level of the whole power system. at almost every big fight you ll see him say I am weak I am weak and still not do anything to improve it. you ll see him berate himself as being weak almost throughout the story, I admit his origins are strong and his system is strong too, but he legit never bothers strengthening himself. 3. there are actions after actions. just like WAO, you ll see yourself exhausted just by reading it due to continuos action.
It's known that there are many fan fics about popular anime and movies. However, this stands above them all. Picturing the environment during an entire series of naruto is not a simple feat, and the development of characters are also stable. I suggest this to all anime fans, it's a new step towards greatness.
Echidna : "Separate, but never parted, Kindred represents the twin essences of death. A simple snow white Lamb, and a shadowy Wolf, they are Kindred. Lamb's bow offers a swift release from the mortal realm for those who accept their fate. Wolf hunts down those who run from their end, delivering violent finality within his crushing jaws. Though interpretations of Kindred's nature vary across Lugunica, every mortal must choose the true face of their death."
But English. The one class she shares with Aya in their senior year. The teacher didn't assign anyone seats, so they staked their claim next to each other in the beginning of the year. It let them whisper in each other's ears and pass dumb doodles back and forth, but today.
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