Sun Sink In The Sea of Darkness

except for some parts l really appreciate good stories like this one. l hope that it continues to the very end,.................................

well i gave 1 * everywhere, while translation is not bad, but the story doesn't  deserve anything more than 1*   - MC is reincarnated super genius, with a "SuperSuper unknown Super person in his soul,    - MC finds a lot of PlotArmor a random person gives him a super defensive armor, than he got a SUperMEGA SUPEr teacher (the shishu of this random personà, who gives a lot of superMegasuper defensive armor/weapon each time he needed it  - enemy are everywhere, and the world is underthreat, but everyone is fighting MC and his people... for reason or without reasonMC finds another Supermegasuper Mirror.... random enemy appear and make random alliance with all kind of ppl, and eveyime they are enemy with MC...in this world there is 2 or 3 levels of power... the common ppl, the strong  and the mega Strong ( MC teacher +2 of his 'brother' are part of them)- All bad Superpowerul ppl don't feel ashamed to attck mc and the world, but the Super megapowrful ppl  of his side 5teacher, ...) don't try to to do their best because they respect an old agreement that we don't know about it..All in all. story fK up

VR? Zombies? I don't even have to say anything. It's an easy five stars for me. The premise is really really really good and the world-building of the VR is awesome. I like how it is casual and not as gory or bloody as all the other zombie genre'd books. And, yeah, it's my cup of teaKeep up the great work, author!

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The characters are abit...meh could use some more depth. The author English skills could difinitley use some help.The story development is a bit weird,it feels as if the step is jumping from one place to another and i cant catch up with that.The author should have emphasised on the trauma of killing a living being. 15 years old kids aren't professionally hit men. How the gurl acrually planned on killing him was out of this world's logic,but I will attribute to her being attribute sycopath with her friend.Over all attribute an immature story written but a high beginner or lower mid tier author. But it has potential to grow into somehing great so I will follow it for now

Good setting only the chapters are too short  OVERALL it's good                     Good setting only the chapters are too short  OVERALL it's good                    

Little to no idea of what's going on story wise, main character is random at best, wakes up in a new world and is okay with it and acting like he knows what's going on like he has a great plan when we the readers don't even understand what he's doing and why but it just works, suddenly  a love interest that make no sense and happens like i saved you now love me, then they split up and the more plans that you don't know about or understand.

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