Great story. Everything is well thought without major flaws. Apart from the beginning when the game is introduced, all the story is online at chapter 101. The only weakness of the author is the lack of narration of combat scenes.The MC is actually smart and not an average Joe described as a genius only to make dumb decisions later. The fact that being strong in the game is needed for survival is a nice addition. It is an awesome plot and I can't wait to read more.
Stopped reading around Chp 165This book is pretty interesting. I was actually hooked for a little bit but there are some cons that really disrupt the experience for me.The main thing is that the mysteries are a bit exasperating. The mysteries keep building at the worst times; some people may not mind this but i find it a bit annoying because it interupts my understanding of the MC and his emotions or gives me the impression that hes overly emotional or weak willed. Most of the time when the weird random stuff happen, he doesnt give it too much thought or tries to analyze things intricately. Personally, i just felt he could do a lot more. Overall, your story premise is very good and entertaining. Ive been enjoying the story so far.One thing i would like to add to improve the story is to make the MC more focused, analytical, relentless and less clueless in finding out what really happened to his brother. Lastly, you should tone down the mystery and randomness of the events or increase the time interval between them. We need more of the MMORPG feel and less of the Murder mystery feel.
The author lacks IQ and the MC lacks EQ.A monk says his wife is a demon 3 times and tells the MC to separate from her. However, he still follows the monk on a demon hunting organization. He had to be a little careful, but he acts like he owns the place.Since my wife is a demon, I won't tell her that I work as a demon hunter. This only shows the immaturity of the MC, generating cliché situations in sequence. The story is completely disappointing.
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