I really quite like this novel. It doesn't take itself entirely seriously, and the system he has allows for the author to get him into contrived and funny scenes that bely common sense (because the system has none). So far it's developed quite well, and fleshes out the world background so that you have a good picture of the past, present, and a hazy view of the future. It's fairly exciting, with battle-scenes that aren't just "He punched him, he fell over" sort of style, and has a decent dialogue along with extreme characters with interesting behaviours and viewpoints.
Author is this dropped? Please do not drop this, the story has been very good so far. Even if there are not many people reading this try to update the novel if the the updates arent frequent. Your hard work will definitely pay off.
Love the way the story keep you coming back for more. Clueless of some characters are cute. And the dominant of other make you to know when they will pounce. I wonder if their will be mpreg in it!
Details which make no sense. Using words on words, power levels which have never been introduced . Contrasting yourself within the first 14 chapters ( magic can't stay hidden , children show reality bending power) then in the next few chapters oh only noble bloodline can use supernatural . oh legendary get 150 year lifespan , legend is first level but of domain , but in next chapter nop only specific domains can make you live longer .... Ranks have never been introduced, the writing style is annoying and the mystery feels forced instead of having anticipation I am cringing at how hard the author is trying and failing at iy
The ancient-looking building that was in front of us must have been the city hall that we were seeking. The building was at the top side of the plaza that was in front of us. The plaza had dozens of people standing around minding their own business. The majority seemed to be some sort of adventurers just lounging around and waiting for their next international calling, like they were meant for something greater than themselves. Oops, a bit of cynicism slipped out there.
After i said that, ichidaime slowly levitate around 2 meter off the ground with the futon and me on top of it (since we are both still on the same futon).
[Tony] there's always the possibility that something could go wrong there's nothing wrong with a little precaution that is why I tell you to be careful and if something did happen to you that would be it. I could make another AI but it would not be you, Athena There's only one Athena and that is why I tell you to be careful. like you said you are my family so stay alive. Now was that all the money from all the major crime bosses in the city.
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