SPLITTING THE HEAVENS

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I think the author is just trying to tell us, he has daddy issues through this novel😂😂😂😂. .................................................................................................,..

Everything in this novel is rushed. The pace is so fast, that i don't care about the plot at all. Besides, it's boring and repetitive. This is definitely one of the worst novel i've read. If this thing could be called a novel at all.

what else do you expect from this kind of story..? well..same old, same old~ system as the golden finger, then checked in idly, then slapped others one by one~ yeah this kinda thing.. anyway, tq for the author and tq for the translation team for the hard work

Saw it at number 1, tried reading, stopped reading because its basically a trash novel without any substance.So weird that it even gained so many followers.

I don't have any ps at the moment, so this is the other best thing I can do to support the author. For me, so far, so good! I like the story structure and how he details the scenes, the author is experienced and has a few minor grammatical errors, but don't ever hold that against anyone. The story is good, and the cover is beautiful! Other than that good read, give it a try!

Overall, it's pretty good and definitely a fun read. The system isn't the most helpful or very complex but I'm still in the early stages of the story. Instead of flooding readers with a bunch of information, the author makes the smart choice to push on with the narrative.Kite is a likable protagonist. He's sympathetic, since he was thrown into a game-like world out of nowhere one day and in the body of someone who is low level. He works hard to get himself ahead and the story already has some nice lady characters if you enjoy some intimacy between characters. The only issues I had with the story were the tense changes in the middle of sentences. Most of the time, instead of using can or can't, use could or couldn't. Otherwise, I recommend the story, it's pretty good. With a little bit of editing I'm sure it'll do even better in the future.

I really like it! My only gripe is that the author mixes up entrée with appetizer all the time.