Spirit Orbs : Chronicles of Ra'as

The character build up is awesome. The characters are very realistic and I like the pace of the book. I'm looking forward to more chapters.

OMG!

this book is noice, but there is no major romantic conflict between the three main characters, a love triangle to clarify,[img=update] romantic conflict

First of all, I’m going to point out that this story is around 70% action and 30% mystery. If you’re looking for action-packed scenes and descriptive fights, then this story’s for you.

Other than that, I love the world-building you did in the beginning and as the story continues.

The plot is eventful and interesting, but it feels like a lot of the mystery is already spoiled since it tells you who the bad guy is (but idk there might be more to the story that hadn’t been revealed yet).

The supernatural abilities are placed well in the combat, though it might be nice to see them used outside of fights.

The characters have nice interactions and there is a strong female lead, but you could give them clearer and more distinct personalities.

The major issue is probably that you should work on your punctuation, sentencing, and paragraphing. Your word choice is great but there’s a lot you can improve.

But overall, I love where the story’s going and I can’t wait for more!

Overall I'll say it's a really good book, top notch characters, uhhhhh, not so shabby character design, and piece of the art world building,dan howbeit quite similar to most protagonist is one of the few main characters that actually seeks vengeance but doesn't let go of basic morality, illara isn't a pushover and actually stands out unlike most female leads, and sai isn't the dumn jock boyfriend, all in all I think it's a great story.

In all honesty I didn't read enough chapters to give this kind of score.
But I've got to say this novel has a lot of potential, there are a few grammar mistakes here and there but at the same time every novel that you will read will have these small grammar mistakes so it's alright.
the author makes sure to update this novel frequently giving us a lot of chapters.
as a said before I didn't read enough chapters yet, so I don't know if the story development is good or not, but at the first couple of chapters the story does progress in a nice and easy way helping the reader understand a bit about the history of the characters but not revealing too much.
the character Design is very good as all of main characters in the beginning are described well and are talked about in an interesting manner.
the world background is also very good at the first chapters from ancient times to current time.
I'm going to continue reading this and give a better review with better details - I believe that if you have free time you should read this, the story is already very interesting in the first chapters.
author-nim please keep up with the good work!

This book is. Hmm...Breathtaking. It is the action for me. the author is well versed at active storytelling. He successfully glue the reader to the stories. I'm more than impressed with the character development.  keep up the good work. also I love the rate of update.

@R_F_T_S  Going through your book, I remembered I have once reviewed it before.  But it wouldn't hurt to review again.

You have used a technique which is beautiful especially when you are describing the fighting scenes.      What can I say, I admire your bold step in writting a book even out of your own culture. This Signaled to me that you have really done a lot of research to come up with this great work.