Hey pal I too just today published my first novel but man you writing is so good I mean there were some parts which felt so mature and best of luck for your novel I would love to see more of it.
I really like this novel as I have read up till chapter 931 to this point, but there are few key point with the story that irks me to no end. One such thing is how the author focuses almost too much on side characters in certain parts or drags out parts of the story without the MC imo. Like the Pandelympics were like 100 chaoters long with little to no content from MC when everything could’ve just been paraphrased and everyone would’ve still enjoyed it, as it was not that interesting for me. Another thing is how author at the start really focused on the summons and the MC progressing, but now it just seems like he’s except for some random bs way to give him new abilities. The third thing that annoys to me is how there is a sorry excuse for information in the novel, like the readers will have no idea about 90% of what the characters are taling about but somehow Adrian just knows everything because the author just focuses on these long drawn out quests for 10s of chapters and no true exploration or level grinding or interactions. Thats it for my rant and I still like the story just author could’ve antop tier novel but because of things listed above it doesn’t ge as much recognition and it stays as a mid tier novel for me and probably many others
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The novel has so much potential but it just gets caught up on the worst things possible. After a while cultivation doesnt exist and filler takes its place, at one point he goes up one minor realm and gains no powers in 70 chapters, That is just beyond disgraceful in my opinion. The highest cultivation realms are also just never explained, even the highest ranked disciple in his sect is in soul formation realm, but every elder and person he meets later on is at minimum 2 major realms ahead, which makes no sense sect wise. Even the demoness never has her realm revealed and is somehow like 10 major realms ahead of the mc at all times, with no progress in their relationship to look forward to either. I think the novel has immense potential and there are some great characters, but it just feels like there is little to no pursuit in actual cultivation, and instead a pure focus on just filler character interactions, which lose their flare a couple hundred chapters in. Thanks for reading
Always been eagerly waiting for the new novels by this author.😍 I must say your unique titles and characters never fail to captivate me.❤️ Inspired by ur works dear Author💕I Read only a few chapters but couldn't stop myself to leave a review. I am wondering if I should leave a spoiler but don't want spoil the fun lol 😂 A must read novel,,,, U like sci-fic Then what r u waiting for? add this book to ur library n start reading😍 Lots of love to the author!!🥰
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