This is really great for characters and the concept of being a Rouge rather than some sort of assassin in the normal sense of things. You have made it so these characters build off each other in some sort of way that make the Main character become better for his style of fighting and thinking to which is awesome and funny. Thank you.
This had potentially to be a pretty interesting novel with a unique idea. Unfortunately, it's been completely ruined by poor grammar, poor dialogue and poor everything, only thing good was the concept.First of all, this author has attempted to copy dialogue from all the chinese novels out there. They've failed badly; it's clear the author has never even had a proper conversation with a fellow human being. The grammar is awful, the interactions are just awkward and they try so hard to sound profound but the author doesn't know what they're typing so it just sounds stupid. The author has tried to make the MC talk like how an elder in let's say a cultivation novel talks, sounding profound and all except it doesn't here, it just sounds stupid because it makes no sense and it's filled with bad grammar. Even without the grammar issues, the phrases don't flow well anyways so it doesn't matter.It's obvious the author spent a bit of time looking over the first chapter and then started speedrunning through the rest without proofreading or editing.
Hey guys, I just realized the first review of my novel that I personally and shamelessly made was all in caps. Anyway, as you can see, this a new novel I am working on.
Apart from the parts that are left unexplained which give some readers a hard time understanding the book, I would say that the book is awesome! the plot is sell defined with interesting premises. The grammar is okay and simple to read.
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