Writing quality: Tbh your writing quality is pretty good not too many errors but hey man nothing is perfectStability of update: I gotta give you 5 stars for that you posted 10 chaps 6 days ago and posted like 20 the past day I think?Story development: Well man what do you expect? So far each world he comes back from he lives a whole new life and only gets 10 soul power yes your logic is 1 to 10 is a average human but dang man first world lookism he became more famous then Eminem and a boxing champ maybe give him a little more? One other thing The fact that he has to keep doing these quests till he dies kinda sucks if he doesn't complete the quest he dies. Plus from so for there isn't really any real development mostly it's the same thing so far go do world mission come back with more soul power get smarter make more money boom next world and repeatCharacter design: How is he not messed up yet? He has lived multiple lives. Yes ik he has higher soul power but come on man he doesn't have the gamer mind or anything? He lived 89 years with the (love) of his life he cries and mourns for a little yes but then he comes back enjoys his youth and thinks about how is soul power can be like conjuror haki from one pieceWorld background: Uh nothing too new compared to canonThere you go my review plus hey author if you want a excuse to make your mc op with soul power make the next world mission bleach? Boom he will be very op when he comes. Back from there
It's very bad, translation is quite bad. I've seen sentences likes "the world has been established for 10 years" and things like this that don't make sense. Not to mention that when the narrator talk about the family members, they use the family name so it end up with sentences like this:"Fang told Fang that Fang should eat too much ... " It is incredibly annoying to understand what is going on. Not recommended if you want to keep at least some of your brain cells alive.
When I first found this book I had an interest in it which lead me to out into my library to collect dust and now that I look at it I realized it has produced over 200 chapters and has come a long way from what it once was to what it is now.
Nice, you write well without showing too many mistakes in grammar or punctuation. i like the way youre taking this on the characters. i too am not a fan of 1 dimensional villains or characters that simply have one quirk that defines their whole persona. The world could be described more intricately but i believe youve done a good job. keep writing ✍️
This story is so amazing, I never expect to read such an amazing work. If you are fan of isekai this is a recommendation, Keep up the good work author!!!!
Just from the first chapter it looks interesting, though I'm quite disappointed with her decision. I will wait till it has more chapters before reading them all and making another review
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