Skill Maker in a Game-Like World

amazingly started ...  already hooked ...️  keep it up, author ...

Nice erosire trademark, the detailed r18 scene. Never cease to amaze me. I hope this won't go premium soon like master of time well anyway, I like the way the story goes when MC have clear goal in life.

I don't think it will be choosen but this novel is better than the other novels in trials it has relatively good progress mc didnt become op in the 20 or 40 chapter i didnt see deep world building but i think its okay for now translating and writing quality has no problem so in the end i hope for this novel to be chosen

Is the mc like the one from library of heavens path ? I loved everything about library's of heavens path BESIDES the mc he was extremely dense about EVERYTHING to the point where i was cringing more often than not. I havent read this so I'll change the stars after I learn about the mc.

pls let this be selected 😭😭😭..............................................................................................................

overall nice read :)story is going really smoothly (as far as i read), and although it's relatively calm pace i enjoy reading it.maybe not to the point of binge reading (as it's setting its own pace) it in one go, but definitely reading it whenever you feel like it and want to relax :)

Okay, I've written about 145 chapters as of writing this, and it's time I update my initial review.Firstly Writing Quality: Once again, I'm not native, but I feel I've done a decent job. The grammar isn't superb, but its readable, to the point where people can still enjoy reading.Stability of Updates: Ooof, well my update stability has been horrible for the past few weeks due to other projects. But I'm back on track. Hopefully you guys see my new novel come up on your recommends.Story Development: I've taken a slow pace approach at writing, and its paying off. There's a sense of gratification in the later chapters, seeing all everything coming together. I'm also proud of the plotlines I've implemented. If you follow along, you can see there is an overarching plot, and small scale plots. Things become very exciting past chapter 120.Character Design: Suprisingly, I'm more impressed with the side character then the main character. Not to say that the main character is bad, he's just somewhat inconsistent at times, as I sometimes forget what his background used to be. But all his mishaps can be explained, though to be honest, it mostly because I'm still an amateur. As for mt favourite character? Conspiracist leafling.World Background: 6/5 I'm very proud of the world I've built. Quite unique, type of stuff you can't read anywhere else. The only race you will know of are the humans, and maybe Fae, apart from that, you're in for a treat.

With the majority of the pain was gone, she felt at ease and drifted to sleep.