Sketching her shadow

What next? Rearing pigs? or Cleaning bathrooms?                                                                                                      .

Well written and consistent MC (Pretty much bootleg Fang Yuan from Reverend Insanity). My only critic is that plot seems to be going too well for the MC. Would like to see him struggle a bit more in order to achieve his goals (Eternal Life).

Applause! An inspired author with great imagination! Simple, straight forward and creative. If I may, here is just a suggestion, more dialogues to keep the story more interesting! :)

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I really like this novel. It has a completely unique premise. The MC is not the transmigrator with the golden finger; instead, the transmigrator is his golden finger. Unfortunately,I, I don't think it will be chosen. Is there anywhere I can continue reading?

I dunno why the rating is so low,  this is an amazing novel if you want an action-filled tale that has a ton of game elements. The description makes the novel sound like slapstick but the MC is actually really smart and the MC and his group spend almost all of their time fighting for their lives so while there are definitely comedic moments its not all fun and games (far from it the MC started chain smoking due to stress lol). Anyway give it a read if you need a break from traditional cultivation novels

Just up to chapter 85 at the moment, felt like I had to leave a review for other readers to an accurate expectation of the novel.**SPOILERS BE WARNED**The intial world background in the first 20 chapters is rather good, however there are quite a few inconsistencies that come about later on. One example of this is the specific money the exclusively use in other continents. This however, doesn't really explain what they DO use instead of this 'mage currency', or in general the setting of which normal people live. The MC later also says he can just imagine the currency into reality and yet he continues to look for his opponents money after defeating them.Another problem is how fast paced and overpowered the MC got got, sort of destroying story development as theres just not enough time to get to know the other characters well enough.Another issue is the most blatant is the characters dialogue, grammer and in general the writing. The potential of this novel is great however the bland dialogue and bland personality of side characters such as the MCs apprentices is just horrible. Just a few chapters in we got to know there specialities but that all the individuality they have. They continues to say things 'at the same time' in sync but the amount of times this has happened is just lazy writing at this point. In contrast the Mcs creations happen to be more interesting than any other character.The last issue I find is the pacing, currently the MC during chapter 85 is at the power level he should be at chapter 250, the immediate growth and powerhouse he becomes after entering the world is just offputting and feels more like a brief power short book than a actual novel.Overall the novel is subpar, it could go far however the issues involving the pacing, poor writing and lack of interesting individuals leads to a lesser than average read.