Story is quite thrilling in a sense of swashbuckling, sea-faring, mischievous adventure. Not my kind of thing but is definitely intriguing that could catch any kind of reader. Everything is in order, depth and words used are appropriate for each scenario that plays out. Although sometimes there are little mistakes hardly seen but I don’t need to nitpick too much. Oh and the protagonist ‘Antonio’ suddenly changed his name along the first chapter to ‘Antonius’. I’m only pointing this out. Anyways would recommend to any reader with a thirst for adventure. Hope you’ll keep writing. Best wishes to you author.
It’s a great read the author is able to take a chunk of history and turn it in to a story that you get completely immersed into before you know it your done with it It’s a great bookKeep up the good work author Although there were something that I got stuck on like how ther were so many perspectives showed at once in completely different places which is normal it still flowed smoothly for the most part
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Honest opinion? While I do like video game novels as I adore all fantasy based novels ,video games have been on the back burner due to how few of them turn out great but this is an exception. just the prologue alone is awesome.Venusean has always been an amazing author with awesome ideas but his one weakness was lack of experience causing his books to lack a certain humanity and causing them to be less than what they could have been but now it has improved. in just the first eight chapters I have seen him showing that he has begun overcoming this weakness and has written a wonderful video game based novel with foreshadowing, humanoid reactions even from Npcs a rare thing in any novel of such a genre even if they are said by lesser novels to be sentient. these ones truly feel as though they're alive just like with other characters specifically the players who he has demonstrated to have their own lives, rich and poor, their own personalities, independent and prideful, psychopathic and broken, kind but with sadness inside etc.I can truly say I can FEEL life in this one like the people are truly person who like what they do but also have their own problems, their own demons, their own pain and their own joys.the world building is moderately paced but unfolds like a divine flowers. as I read it while playing (eurielle - spacemen) I couldn't hold my self back from screaming out in joy.THIS is what I want to see more of. to be honest I believe this might be the point where I surpass a mere fanatic.This great old one known as 《redacted》 leaves you with one simple lesson. Read it. Read it then love it then kneel for you can never love it more than me. also if you ignore my warning I may or may not corrupt you in order to force you to do that but that has merely merely 1000% per cent chance of happening so......Read or die!
Hoping for fast updates. Seems like jay aslan story but hoping that this one won't get stuck ........,............,.....................................,
Yes,,it's good and I read 25 chapters and I like it,,,but I have question that there is system tag,,will there be any system or mc get it later ,,can anybody respond this question 🤔
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