I already wrote a review however as it seems author really wants it, I have decided to write a more detailed one.So far the story is nice and shows a lot of promise as well as some little bits of what is to come.The author is clearly still an ******* and as such I wish to cut him some slack.Try to keep it up and write longer chapters.
This reminds me of Superman’s backstory scientist saves his son and sends him to another world where he has a special power check check and checkOverall good story I would enjoy reading more keep it up
"go ahead then." jungkook said to taehyung. taehyung started to do cpr onto the girl. it actually worked, she started coughing. "woah, how'd you do that?" hoseok said very surprised by his actions. "i saw some humans do it to a drowning person. two times that i learned how to." taehyung replied. the girl looked at taehyung and jungkook. "huh..? who are you?" she said.
The trio rushed through the brush, occasionally running into something due to the prevailing darkness inhibiting almost all sight whilst moving. None of the three possessed any adequate support Spells to help rapid traversal nor assist the situation with the low light levels, so the situation was not looking too great.
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