Quite well written although there is a ton of relationship drama, nothing unfixable and it's not extended needlessly so that's good. No ntr and harem is small but we'll done.
Although the story starts on a tragic and hard to digest note, the true story starts on a very good note. MC is surrounded by a loving mother and sister, in a mansion full of beautiful women just ripe for the taking. The pace of the story is good, not too slow and not too rushed, new characters are constantly introduced, with new developments occurring every few chapters.The story is in the buildup stage, and it takes time for it to build, but it's worth the patience. Although there are points of improvement since it's the first work, it's a pleasant journey of healing surrounded by loving family and wives.
Came looking out for copper, but I found gold.
I checked out the story as I liked the cover (author has changed it to a new one), but I stayed due to the story.
Though the author should work on a catchy title for the novel, I liked the story so far. Especially the little interactions between the MC and his family.
It starts out pretty good kind of cringe at the beginning, but has the opportunity to be awesome but then the author takes mushroom soup gets kicking head donkey. Something takes a character who has unbelievable traumatic experiences where his little sister is right by men, and then the authoritative to a knee and naïve retard, listening to his naïve, retard Sister. They know that antagonist has the intention to racing the girls, and he just walks away, singing à la la like a freaking retard. This is trash, don’t read it if you like logical anything
One of the most amazing stories you can find on wn. It hits you with great story, harem and lemons. Cool mc and lovable girls make this journey even more fun, deep plot helps a lot too...ofc hehe. Book has over 120 chaps and I hope you will give it a go. Very good read!
So far I’m loving this story - finally an mc that isn’t a beta or a simp- he’s possessive in a good way and is not afraid to kill those who stand in his way - he’s still young thus he still has some growing up to do but he’s making progress - I hope he and his mom start developing their relationship more which seems to be happening. Only criticism I have - which is minor- is that when meeting the new ladies there isn’t any description on how they look like - for a while I didn’t know how anyone looked like, but this seems to be changing in the later chapter - oh and there seems to be too few chapters making it hard to wait for the new chapters to come. Author keep up the good work - can’t wait to see what new powers he gets and to learn more about his passed lives
Story starts off a little dark so if you aren't quite the type to enjoy that type of stuff I recommend you brace yourself before reading. The grammar is good, but my one major criticism to the author is to space out the paragraphs. No one likes to read giant lumps of text over and over again.
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I checked out the story as I liked the cover (author has changed it to a new one), but I stayed due to the story.
Though the author should work on a catchy title for the novel, I liked the story so far. Especially the little interactions between the MC and his family.