Shards of the Broken Heart

Good novel author!
The novel starts off good despite the first two heavy chapters and as I read more, I found it interesting.  He has a lovely family to 'take care' him.

Although the author’s wording is a little off—which I’m guessing because it’s their first novel and not native English speaking— the novel is very well written. The pacing is gripping and the way they tell the story actually had me invested as though I was dealing with it myself.

It’s very emotional, there’s a perfect balance of thought process and descriptions. I absolutely adore just how much effort and imagination that put into this. I don’t think people should complain about the R that happens in the first chapter. The world is a dark place sometimes, and I feel it takes a lot of courage to explore this, for the MC to become the person they need to be to prevent other things from happening like this in the further.

Great work! Keep it up.

This novel is a good read, but if I want to tell about its problems, MC gives a lot to women, while they are nothing but resource leeches, and the most dangerous thing is that he tells them his secrets. I feel threatened whenever I see a man tell his secrets to his women.  After that, MC has no purpose and is easily manipulated by his women

Hello there.

Well it finally time to become shameless and review my own work giving it the highest rating to kickstart my rise to reach the top. The snu-snu grind would be slow. And there may be an introduction to everyone's favorite face slapping system in the later chapters.

A little bit about MC:
Cautious, Level-headed, Detached to others, Family-oriented, Loyal, Ruthless to enemies, Hard working, and Has Dark Backstory
.... (character development under progress)

What to expect:
Harem, Romance, Slow love progression, Lack of plot-holes, Enemy mutilation or FATALITY!!! (somewhat gory), and .... (less expectations are better)

Hope you all enjoy my work