was enjoying the Novel up until the enslavement part , I also know why it happen , just threw me off. kind of lost the "air" the story had with the slice of life and adventure kind of vibe. also not of fan of prophecies , to much drama for me but I enjoy it up until where I read.
I like how ruthless the MC is to his enemy's! It is very entertaining to read and I like how smart he is as well. All and all this is an amazing novel and I love where it's going! There are a couple things that annoy me though,First off is how he kept the baby of the princess. Like if you could turn off the baby making function in your baby maker then why not do that as soon as your able too? When the baby was born he didn't kill it,I know that's messed up but baby's are annoying. But if MC didn't want to do that then just go back in time and don't have sex with her at all or make sure you can't have children and then have sex with her! That would be the smartest choice because people can get to the MC by the baby! I know he can just rewind time but that's just a hassle! Speaking of the MC and his crazed sex drive! He is smart until he gets sex then he's an idiot! Other then that stuff I love where this story is going and can't wait to see it!
Good job, you created an English version so that it can be enjoyed by readers around the world. I hope they enjoy your story as much as I enjoy reading every novel you create
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I think that I have only come across problems which can be fixed fairly easily, like the paragraphs, as I read a lot of novels it's not a problem but new readers may find it quite hard to read and will most likely lose their words so separate the book and there are a few grammatical errors but even I have that problem so it's fine.
MISERY!I'm sorry this just hit wrong for me.I'm a blue collar worker in a dead end job, and I listen to web novel to escape that.This story is probably hilarious in China, but for me it's too much pain instead of slapstick.Fourth wall is constantly broken, taking the reader by the shoulder and complaining about kids today,the bad job market, how ridiculous a cultivation world is-- I'd say that it's a parody of the whole cultivation novel genre. The MC has endless bad luck after he is swept away from his mediocre life as a 20 year old to become a hopeless old man who's golden finger is to be a janitor in a cultivation academy, and level up from cleaning.That alone could have been enough or even epic. But as of 21 chapters in, it was too miserable for me to endure anymore.It's definitely meant to be tongue in cheek but it hit too close to home for me to enjoy.
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