shackles of shadow

"Whatever, let's go into the bandits hideout." Alodar ignored most of what Temporal said, but he at least heard about the part of Fletcher being his ancestor.

"Having fun?" He asked with a proud tone.

I land behind some sort of barricade made of steel with lots of broken crystals on the walls. I look infront to see the populace shock in their face as they quickly move even faster and knights come in lines trying to intercept me.

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

masih pertama kali baca untuk selesaikan tugas FP

Did you dropped this novel? IMO it was going great. Huge shame 😔

One of the best story with unpredictable plot, makes reader's guess n imagine 🤔

Aiden's journey to an exciting new level, blending intrigue with intense character development. As Aiden delves deeper into the Code Guild, his growing powers and the mysterious book he’s connected to slowly start making sense, revealing his role as a Code Conduit. The introduction of Master Lin as a mentor, the hints at the dangerous Nullifiers, and the arrival of Maya, who shares a unique connection to the code, build a strong foundation for what’s to come. The mix of thrilling world-building, Aiden’s intense training, and the revelation of the Etheric Assembly sets the stage for even greater challenges and discoveries ahead, leaving readers eagerly anticipating the next chapter.

Bro, the first chapter of your story has emotional depth, and it's hard to judge the entire book based on just that. But I can tell you, you can add a mystery tag if you want. I feel like you should start with Renzo in an emotional way and make it suspenseful if you don't mind.