Settling the Score

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Meditação (Nivel 1)

        Umayos na siya ng tayo at tiningnan ng masama ito. "Com'on. Wala na akong gana, ayaw na lumabas ng iba." Pumasok na siya ng kotse.

send him to the world of naruto that Naruto is always talking about protecting his friends and tals would be very interesting to see what he would do when his friends are dead

"No, no problem, Aren," Terry answered, taking another portion of apple pie, today's dessert.

[ Ding__________killed.....]

"It's either that or we don't see combat. I don't know about any of you but I want to be in the frontlines, fighting alongside the others"

"Didn't your mother ever teach you that it is rude to point, and at a lady no less," Luffy said causing Robin to chuckle. "As for your question, she works for me," he said taking both Robin and Pell by surprise. "She was my spy inside Crocodile's organization. Now that Crocodile is out of the picture, she has come back to rejoin my crew," Luffy lied smoothly.

It’s an ok novel. Atleast better than most in this platform. Reviewed at ch 200Personal Score - 7/10MC - vagrant cultivator turned serious loyal soldier. His past life is only significant at the start and with regard to his combat/survival skills. He’s still OP though with edgy/cringe-y moments.Side Characters - generally bland and predictable but inoffensive. They’re not really vital to the story as almost everything is dependent on the intervention of the MC.Romance - it’s cute but it was too abrupt and became predictable. MC also suddenly had a goofy personality when it did happen which is kinda weird given the prior chapters leading to that. But he then switches to a cold and uptight personality at will.World Building - the world is grand, vast, and curiousity inducing. Mechas are a thing but not really a big part of combat as of yet which is weird because it was the focus at the start. It’sPlot - It’s ok. Nothing ground breaking. Imagine a Starcraft Terran novel but with cultivation levels. One criticism is that the plot is too MC-centric as mentioned earlier.Dropped at 200 because I’m really not a fan of the loyal and uptight soldier trope. Seems too propaganda-ish to me. Also the plot became uninteresting to me as it everthing became a “serve your country” plot. But it’s good though so give it a shot.

I read up to Chapter 9, and I would like to congratulate author for a job well done!I love the writing style and the world building. I also love how it's easy to read since I'm not info-bombed most of the time. Keep up the good work!

Okay the previous novel has be removed, so this is a Chinese translated novel, you may have seen but was changed to err%& because the power stone contribution was not working, so I changed the previous novel to this.