I was scrolling through new novels and found this novel. I like vr novel so I decided to read this. My first thing to compliment is the writing quality. 5/5 no grammar mistakes, fight scenes are not long. The world building is pretty good as more and more info are given. Keep it up author
The book is good but people who dont like the dumb idoit mc and the wierd childish vibes and All that cringy stuff this book isnt for you the catagory of the book should chqnge from games becuase doesn’t feel a game to the reader
This is the first time I'm leaving a review without being asked to. I really like this novel. Not only is it particularly hard to find grammatical errors but the writing is so smooth that you would have to force yourself not to enjoy it. Its really easy to see yourself in the midst of the characters and thats hard to come by.The story is a hook. I haven't read much cuz I'm busy writing a novel of my own but Lord this is Spirit stone worthy I wouldn't mind at all if this went premium. If you like stories where the mc is legit the bad guy? Stories like that of the Joker or something, then I think you'd like this. Hey Author, keep it up, I may not comment often cuz I'm hurrying to the next chapter but you've got a loyal reader right here!
Take your time with the story and don't rush it. I've seen many a novel where the author felt pressured by his readers to quicken the pace and ended up being dissatisfied with the way it turned out. I would hate to see this novel get dropped or enter hiatus. https://m.webnovel.com/book/13563566205267205
I expect my readers to participate, now i'm rereading my own story :)I find it interesting too, what do you think about it?Please let me know what you think, so that I can improve my book.Thank you!
This is a novel about a young earth man getting an innkeeper system, overall this novel was good. Didn't notice any obvious grammatic errors, the world building has being done quite well, the story has an immersive quality. The characters are well developed and the plot is quite interesting.
One of the rare books on Webnovel that is actually well written, has a plot, and characters with depth.The world is interesting and unique enough to not follow the standard trope of System integration into the world. The MC is relatable and human with foibles, desires, and fears that make her relatable. She has a dimensionality to her that most OP characters in webnovel's lack.I think this is a must read for anyone that enjoys System type novels.
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