sect leader

i read this novel somewhere before . it was really fun for the 140 chapters that i read. nice mix of comedy and action . the story takes place in modern era with cultivation elements much like the red packet server novel. characters are not many and so far no useless characters seen. also the author uses the comedy due to misunderstanding and age gab a lot which i really like :p

This novel gets worse and worse as it keeps going, mc doesn't use his brain to think and always make bad decisions. For example, when he had the chance to be the first one to leave starter's village and increase the gap between him and other players, he logged out for a long time and lost a huge portion of his lead.He lost the chance of being the first player who gets a class. We all know that the start of each game is so important and you can't even waste one hour without doing any thing since it is the time when everyone grows fast and can get the most benefits. Also it is the best time to grow so that he will gain more money.Also, mc thinks with his lower body a lot, i mean the first thing that can into his mind when he got money was to hire a beautiful housekeeper? Tf?

So let's be honest, this review isn't really here to explain anything or whatever, it's just for an additional 5 Star review. Consider dropping a good review for the honesty bros. Of course you can write a negative one, as long as you are constructive, although that would be hard before getting to at least 10 chapters...

Cool book, there are just some small writing errors but overall, it's good. Good luck author. Waiting for more chapters............................................

5 star rating for a well put together story. It's embarassing to say but this is the first story I felt so attached to, 100% honesty. Reading this story gave me chills though, a man with that much power, i love, love, love it. Gotta say I look up to the author for having such talent.

It's a great cultivation novel, with promising Storyline.  The author should consider using adequate paragraphing, by writing different conversations on different lines.

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