Secretly Mine

I enjoy the story. Even though you could call the plot "basic" or "generic" it is still interesting enough to completely draw me in.                        

well starting was fine... the concept of post-apocalypse is pretty new... but the story goes downhill after his ass kicked by law enforcers.... he suddenly becomes kind of simp+egoistic+loser Mc thinks he is a war veteran or something...  I say... he can't even take few law enforcers and wanna take revenge on a more powerful criminal organization for some researchers who he meets only a few times... why not just worry about your ass and live well...

In just the first 20 chapters, the premise is already showing signs of being ignored in favor of focusing on generic cultivation novel themes. Sure the MC can't cultivate normally, but body cultivation isn't a foreign concept. And it just so happens that body cultivation requires a lot of medicinal herbs. Makes sense and should work out, but then things get weird.There's only passing reference to the MC actually using the system. And sometimes it's just ignored and hand waved afterward with a "oh yeah he did that, so that's why he can do this now".Speaking of the MC, the author doesn't seem to know what to do with him. Is he scheming? Kinda, not really. He does some unnecessarily scheme-y things, but do they matter? It's starting to seem like no, as it veers more and more into generic cultivation garbage. Angry clans, young masters, shadowy figures that speak cryptically and probably won't appear again for 50 chapters. Sure poisoning the sect elders, and then giving the antidote that contains a different poison seem like the edgy thing to do, but what advantage does that give him?Then he starts going into blood rampage mode for... reasons? There weren't any signs of it before, but sure, go slaughter for a month and ignore the herbs you should be raising. I'm sure the elder you asked to watch them will take care of it seeing as you poisoned him before.All in all, people making dumb decisions for dumb reasons, or even no reason at all. Mildly entertaining when it's not ignoring its own premise, generic stupidity when it is.

This romance novel fell flat for me on multiple levels. The characters lacked depth and development, making it difficult to connect with their supposed journey of love. The plot felt contrived and pre

"You can use the cells you have to try and find a way thats good for a human body but beware my cells could react badly to chemicals or not be compatible with any human. If that is the case, don't use them or you'll be responsible for quite a few deaths and something tells me you don't want that." she said, sounding wise for a 14 year old. Her blue eyes held wisdom no child should ever have and it gave Cameron the creeps.

"Listen, I'm not that great with advice, but honestly, I think you should go for it."

"Will first they are the most popular idols today and second, hello I'm a fan" she said with sarcasm.

well this my honest review this story has an interesting concept and a good power system  i liked it even but there are lots of mistakes in this story it's too fast paced and it could be said that there little to know character development and the mc goal is very vague I don't know what Iam expecting like why do I continue to read and the second is that this story lacks alot of information iIknkw information dumps are boring but sometimes when done correctly gives the story life and the interactions feels very inhuman iIguess it's not that its bad it just feels like robots taking to each other iam not invested in there charcters also so i cant like or dislike them