Its a great start to a novel, the pacing is good and the world is interesting. In some areas, it could use an editor though, there are some sentences that come off a little weird. But as of chapter 44 its been a fantastic read. Keep it up.
Great book indeed. Very enlightening. It opened up my understanding of other cultures and especially about blacksmithing and martial arts. I gained immensely reading this book.
Your Novel is great read up to 25th chapter so far however the fact that the mc has obtained a sss ranked bloodline so early in the series makes me upset becuase it will be the usual Op mc in attributes wise which wrecks the development abit however your book is still amazing so far and i hope that you have planned out a lot of ways to keep the book moving forward
If it's his book, I'm gonna certainly read it because I love his style. This author is so superb and he's got talent. This book is gonna be great just like his other works. I'm looking forward to reading more chapters of the book.
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