Satranga Ishq: Tales Of Love

hi guys! I am the author of this book. this book will not continue further. iIstopped posting because it wasn't receiving enough popularity and now, even after getting contracted, I regret my decision of stopping this novel. anyways, if y'all liked this novel, you can check out the other novels of mine too! it's name is 'the brutal ceo'. thanks for all the support! and sorry for stopping this wholesome novel so suddenly.

The structures of the sentences is pretty bad, in a later chapter idk I did an expample.The story could be good, but as I said the structure of the sentences is so bad it ruins the flow of the story. Some grammar mistakes here and there.Story nothing new, but till now havent seen any story which has done a good job at writing such a story,pretty sad

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

Jeremiah hadn't noticed how quiet everywhere had become because of his agitation. But as the blood moon completed, the silence of the night was broken by a loud blood curling howl. The howl sounded across the entire city. You couldn't even be sure if it was just one animal or an entire pack. Maybe it was even multiple packs, one could not tell. But one thing was sure, there was so much bloodlust in that howl.

"Now, now. Let's do this inside the house instead shall we" Harris says while chuckling.

"Wait, You already memorized the dance?! YOU HAVE TO TEACH MEEE!" Kila fangirled, screamed and shook me intensely.

<This time I shall let you choose what race do wish to be born as king of the undead>

"Goodnight El."