I don't exactly have a review in mind, since this is my own story.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
heyo crazy cronie here,review on 02/04/2021 @chap28 (released chap till date: 39)review divided in: Short reviewLong review IMORatingsConclusionWarning (includes spoilers) short review: A good SOL novel. Maybe Dark SOL? Mc ain't dense and pussy unlike most SOL novels. Badass mc with likeable daughter.long review: pros: 1) A good SOL novel. Basic concept similar to most novels though the execution of the plot is entertaining2) This is a little dark novel. But also has fluffy side. Contradictory huh? Read it and you might understand. 3) A badass, savvy & OP mc. 4) The writing is simple and easy to understand. TL is doing a good job for now with the translation.5) Characters even though not properly fleshed out, it isn't bad to the point it's unreadable.6) the interactions between the characters are better than most novels out there. Though it exactly doesn't feel real, the interactions between the mc and his daughter never fails to put a smile on my face at the end of the chapter7) No probs with pacing. Nothing seems out of place.cons:1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] As mentioned above this novel has a dark side despite the fluffy romance moments. (This depends person to person, for me a pro.)2) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Inconsistent update! Really hate it!!! (7ch/d for og) & (14ch/d for tl). But this is my personal scale so you might as well ignore it.3) There are few typo errors, though it's not to the point that it's unreadable. No prob with grammar.. 4) Greedy WN & TLs locked this novel only after 4 chaps!! This sucks. That's why deducted points from updates.5) Even though the interactions are awesome, we many times fail to grasp the emotions and facial expressions of the characters, since it's never mentioned what expressions the characters really have on their face. 6) No world build up and no plotline as of now. One can guess some plotlines tho but we know nothing of this world!IMO:- We need consistent updates!!!!RATINGS: writing: 8/10 (pro-4 & con-3)update: 4/10 (con-2)plot: 8.5/10 (pro-1&2, con-1&6) characters: 9/10 (pro-3&5)pacing: 8/10 (pro-7)dialogues: 8.5/10 (pro-6 con-5)entertainment: 9.5/10OVERALL: 4/5 Conclusion:An amazing SOL novel with excellent potential; the only prob being updates! Hope to see regular updates in this one... Chapter 1 will be enough to hook most of you to this novel.WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)*- MC is SUPER OP! But also kinda submissive to his daughter... Can be seen as his love for his daughter (fatherly love no Incest!!!)
loving the concept of the story, the writing quality is good and the character design pulls you to read more. A princess and dragon, interesting novel.keep up the good work dear author
At first, I thought this was just a copy of The bloodline system and my vampire system. But no, even though at the start they might seem similar, as the story progresses it becomes better.I just read 25 chapters and already am in love with it.Hope that you publish more chapters
Thank you for the chapters. Since there are only 4 chapters I can't say much about the story but I like it so far. I don't have anymore power stones for today otherwise I would give you one. I am just going to add this novel to my library. I don't really give out any reviews because I am no good at it, but I hope to read more of this novel.
its alright, i guess. i read up to chapter 10 before i stopped. interactions between father and son are very unnatural and feels super robotic, and it feels like the bisexual stuff is done more for the sake of it than for actual character development. MC is inconsistent in some places, acting and behaving out of character for a "lone wolf" type. also, it felt like a poor writing choice to have the very first job be irregular. inconsistencies with registering to become a porter like how the guy who signed him asked for no ID at all. i guess if you want a novel with a gay mc, this is a choice. otherwise? just read SS rank suicide hunter or stay at home dad in another world, both of which fill their niche better than this one thats straddling both.
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