Interesting take it slowly yeah yeah skill practice yeah yeah . Selling yeah yeah looking for treasures no not yet . Is he OP? No no and then I get 140 words.
Hello author! Nice story, however, there are problems! Examples are some spelling mistakes. The updating time is not really being obeyed. However, nice story! Nice plot! Good background and then good character design🥴🥴🥴🥴
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As a rookie author myself i hope your novel does well and you enjoy writing. All the best on the trails ahead.As a reader, I found the premise of your story to be very intriguing, especially with the heavenly tribulation origins. The world has potential for intrigue and grabbing someone's attention. I appreciate the creativity.As for the con, the conversations between the characters are not organic, making it feel unreal and stiff. Also, the transition between the different scenes seemed a little rushed. In my eyes, your novel has potential as long as you work on the interactions and the pacing. Those are my humble two cents as a reader. All the best!!!
The decent book and plot are a bit unique but I don't really like MC personality. He is hot-headed and a bit of a wimp. Also, I do not understand some of the decisions he makes. Near the start of the book, the principal + teachers are laughing at him and making fun of him and he still wants to stay in the school. Makes no sense as there are literally no benefits to that. Would consider the story average.
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