Romance with the billionaire

For now, the story is quite good. But seeing that the chapters are still a few, I can't say much about this novel. However, I could say that, although it is good, the writing is too draggy. Too much information on a lot of not really useful stuff. I hope the author takes my advice to not really dragged the description too much and also some paragraph are too long as i read on a phone. Thank you.

      Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

I like the writing style, it's easy to imagine and it feels like I'm watching! I can't wait to see more interactions between hale and her father!!

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Only shooting stars break the mold

"Smart girl" Brian says following my gaze and looking after

He pukes until he can't puke any further and then sits down while blankly staring ahead. He doesn't know how long he stares blankly, but a sudden wave of screens popping up in his vision brought him back to his senses as he read over them all.