Nah this author is TOO GOOD, author knows how to make someone feel any emotion, author hit my heart way to many times, author definitely has something with yanderes too
Unexciting but passable. So-so gimmick, so-so execution. Characters are bland (no surprise there), the story is non existent (again no surprises) and the worldbuilding is generic. Although it's rather pedestrian it isn't very bad either, just fair-to-middling imo. I can see it getting better in the future. 2/5.
This is a review of the first twenty-seven chapters. The story is based in a magical world where different civilizations are fighting for dominance. The main character, Zhang Yang, is bound to a village building order(a system) and has to build up a village that can last for 300 years along with other tasks inorder to return home. Many of the antigonists are also bound to a similar village building order. The plot feels like a story version of the game Civilization. The Protagonist’s character fluctuates between a laid-back acceptance and paranoia. Even with the author’s explanations, not all of Zhang Yang’s decisions make sense. Overall, the story is entertaining and doesn’t require you to understand how the “system “ functions to enjoy it.
Looks good so far, a very fun start, an interesting MC, good plot, all I need to add something to my library but on top of that the grammar is pretty good too! Thanks for the hard work Author!
Anyone know where to get raws? or the chinese title of this novel? I quite like this novel.This is machine translated and the editing is not enough. Sometime names changes, such as Yuan and Fate being used for the same person.
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