Ring of Desire

"Anyway, we will talk about your encounter later on but now we have to find that bastard who poisoned you. If I find that person I will personally show him how death is better than living".

More plz

The little girl's plate was decorated with lots of color to make it look nice and pleasant.

I shoved that object onto my pocket. Looking at it brought back too many memories, unhealthy ones. They would leave me unfocussed.

when sergeant John climbed the Boxing ring and proposed a friendly match, Daniel wanted to go all out and see his true strength but when he checked sergeant John's cards to gauge his strength Daniel saw a new green cards among John's other regular soldier cards

Ryker-"Calvery split into two columns and close in on the survivors from the volleys , once on the battlefield keep straight and circle back around until the enemy is crushed "

It's an okay start. The content is extremely similar to The Castle Of All People: The Only Random Army Angel At The Beginning Of The Game a few years back though.

Nice one bro the clock is thinking 🤔 I think you should be very fast ⏩ all the best and I think you are going to the first 200 with the highest power stones 💎 I love your novel

The description of the characters and narrative style are peak. Grammar is perfect. Perfect use of punctuations and storyline has me in a chokehold. Alexei x Oliver🤩❤️

"I'm thoroughly impressed! The quality exceeded my expectations, and the experience was seamless. Highly recommended!”