1. Shameless MC 2. Funny / brilliant albeit slightly vulgar dialogue 3. Interesting romance foreshadowing 4. Lots of fighting / skills5. Reference to modern day games My 2 cents worth after reading the raws.
This review is done on the app (disclaimer):Overall this story is better than about 89% of the the stuff the professional writers on this site put out. All I can say is give it a try, if you are on this site any cliche this story uses should not bother you that much.
honestly love this story and the characters. the only criticism I have for this story is the author needs to re-read or get an editor. they regularly make simple typos or have levels show after level ups that already happened. keep up the good work author.
How should I put it starts stereotypical, but within that first chapter every thing changes. Our MC has cancer and suddenly a demon pops up to make a deal. The plot is fast paced with plenty of action, but the dialogue and transition are weird. I don't know if that is the fault of the translator or the Author
I like the book so far with its heavy focus on war and kingdom-building which I feel should stay that way as I feel if haram or romance was added it may mess up the balance if not done correctly. For me maybe a little romantic subplot but definitely not haram as I feel that it won't be good chemistry with how the novel is so far. But overall it's a good novel apart from the grammar mistakes and I would love to see more.
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