Reversal Archive

I had fun reading this book. I’m glad that even if there is a love triangle between the characters the story doesn’t really focus much on it. Instead it tells how the ML and FL try to overcome the problem whilst solving the issues of their Kingdom. Looking forward to reading your other works.

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it all started pretty well, but then the author began to build a plot in the style of "what is my mighty China." I won’t be surprised if the author of this book blowjob on himself. I do not recommend this book for reading.

usually don't write comments or rate until I read the whole book, but ❤️ it. good job. 👍👍🥳

The system ruins the story. It literally adds nothing, why would you put a system in a romantic novel?!                                    

an interesting book, I most like the main character who is a bit childish and cute.I hope he'll turn into a child again, it would be facenating

This is a decent novel having "magic" in a modern society. Unfortunately like most such novels it suffers from some glaring plot holes. In the end I found the "trial 1" chapters to be very boring more than anything else, and coupled with the plot holes caused me to drop it at around chapter 140 even though I had been only skimming through those trial chapters.First off about the other reviews on MC and his personality. In my opinion it is quite good like a normal human, and you will have problems with that only if you prefer the psychotic MCs of modern chinese xianxia.Coming to the plot holes, the most glaring ones are those trials. Putting completely untrained teenagers, including just video gamers, in life and death scenarios in trial-0 (they would not really die though most participants don't know that) in a jungle against beasts and all is totally stupid. You will not filter out strong willed people like that, rather psychotic killers who have been killing since childhood.Also you see some upper world fellows abusing some "loophole" (though we are never told what that is) to enter the trials, yet the organizers do zilch about it nor invoke any deterrence. In other words, if not for the appearance of MC, the trials are just places for upper world fellows to cheat and sweep away, losing the whole point of the trials. The appearance of MC is also a cheat but let's ignore that.Then the second trial is even more stupid.  Most participants have been training in the academy which is just regular studies, training and competitive fights but there is absolutely zero preparation for what they have in trial-1. So essentially these are again untrained teenagers put in this trial of "courage" or whatever. In real life the only result of such a trial will be creating fellows with deep traumas and unstable personalities, the kinds of which most modern armies will immediately expel.Lastly my pet peeve on such modern setups though most readers seem to prefer it. Swords, spears, bows in a super advanced Earth. Give me a break. By any standard of logic magic infused guns, snipers, explosives and all will be far far superior. Just shows lack of imagination in conceptualizing modern weapons with magic/cultivation stuff, let alone futuristic weapons. Authors seem to be just following the classic cultivation novels rather than thinking about what such a post modern setup can actually look like.

A great football lightnovel, i hope you keep on updating and I appreciate how quick the updates are man.