Revenge For The Alpha Queen

Not sure what's going on with some of these reviews. This story is bad. I mean it might be better than most of this batch of stories, but that's not exactly a high bar. It's almost written like it is supposed to be a parody of some system novels the problem is the jokes just don't land that well and are just kind of eh. The MC is kind of meh as well. The system is just terrible.

Just a bit "Meh". I find it very difficult to read and a bit boring in its progression.....................,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,,,,,,,.,,.,,.,,.,

A story which takes place in Japan. A young boy, at high school level, discovers his super natural power. As it is only a weak power, he diligently practices and hints his skills.Once being a working *****, he quits his job and engaged in founding secret organization to foster persons with super natural powers.He is a natural talent in developing those powers and teaching them, at the same time he finds friends for a secret society.It's an enjoyable and diverting story showing the life of students and beginning working people locking foot distraction in their dull and strongly regulated life.

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I've started to judge novels simply based on the original country setting. Xia, zhou, etc are all repeated settings without the slightest bit of anything a good novel needs and 99% the novels written by such authors are hot trash.I'm not going to read this, but I'm warning you. If I turn out to be wrong, my fault ig.

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amazing, the revenge is the plot so difficult. but you can written this story.. so i will give you big applaus..semangat terus ya kak.. semoga bisa jadi pemenang.

Since I have reached chap 97 I think it is time to give this a lengthy review. First I'll do it according to webnovel and then I shall rant. DO NOT read the rant if you don't want spoilers.WRITING QUALITYI really have no criticism here. The grammar is good, the story is fluid. Dialogues are put well and you can easily follow who says what. Overall, a pleasant surprise here.STORY DEVELOPMENTVery nice honestly. The world is alive and functions without the protagonist. There is an element of mystery surrounding the plot which enhances the stakes and makes progression all the more enjoyable. I do have a few things here that I dislike but that will come in the rant part.CHARACTER DESIGNThe characters are alive! They actually think and aren't just your cardboard cutouts of stereotypes. The MC shows his intelligence and doesn't just pull it out of nowhere like many other "genius" protagonists. The side cast could do with a bit more work but nothing major.WORLD BACKGROUNDI've already said that the world is alive. There is an actual economy in the background. There are shops and vendors and whatnot, not just your typical black market auctions. The apocalypse is also relevant in the way people of this novel think and act. The world is consistent.RANTINGI hate when tech type MCs don't explore their creative abilities beyond just making armoured suits and weapons. I want an MC that will make a car/plane/ship or any other vehicle. There is more to machines than just mechs and such. He made a powered armour that can run for more than an hour and also take a beating, but his knowledge and tools are still extremely rudimentary? How is he not making just your general appliances, eg a fridge would probably be a revolution. Running water has also been identified as a problem, why not solve that? Making a buggy to explore the ruins of the old world would probably also be a pretty high-priority goal. Speaking of vehicles, there is a critical lack of them in here. The logistics of the Lord's territory puzzle me. How are materials transported between cities? Is it only Rust doing the transport? If so why has there been no mention of the transport mess that was certainly happening during the tournament? Are there other ways of transport? Trains or zeppelins? Are there are no zeppelins because of idk birds, why not mention that? I hope the world expands because it really holds a lot of potential.