Return of the last survivor

Awesome book! I am so glad I had the opportunity to read it!
Well laid-out characters in a very well-written setting alongside good dialogues.
Love the book! Keep writing, author-san!

Alryt, nice story I must say. Your writing quality is great. You got a nice flow I give u that. But you might want to cut down your paragraphs in your second and third chapter. Cos in those chapters, you have lots of important info... So making it long, made my head ache some more with my headache.

I had to focus so much or I wud av lost what the paragraph was saying. Normally a paragraph shud b btw 3-5 if I am not mistaken.

Little or no typos, great book n plotline author. It shows author knows what he is doing. Added to my library, would love to see where this is going. Nice work, keep it up.

Amazing Story, The writing style, the vivid details, the progression of the story, Everything is done excellently.

Just the details and the amazing progression of the story is enough for readers to understand the efforts put into it.

I don't really read apocalypse stories, but this story hooked me up. Read all the chapters and you will be amazed

Hey there, just informing you guys that the new cover has been uploaded. Just saying that this cover is full of characters of the future, and current, and will not change for a long time since there characters will remain the most important in the novel for a long time

It's me. I feel like this will be a better novel in terms of writing than my previous one; Sovereign of Divinity. I will be publishing chapters on both of them, maybe twice a week. Thanks you

Well the story is written pretty nicely. It binds the reader with story urging them to think what's next will be there in story for them. The characters bulid up is also great with their skills. Overall the apoloclyps theme is well suited too . There is not much grammatical errors which is nice again but I feel there is too much information and explanation give.You could just casually describe a character or a scene without adding additional details . No doubt story has great potential

I love this novel. It's an interesting story with excellent storytelling. It has the making of a story that simply yearns to satisfy your desire. It's a fun apocalypse novel with some game elements added in to make it funnier. You won't find any of that cringe about protagonists and their personality, never questioning what the MC does, he just does it. He doesn't have to explain the scientific knowledge about his actions, and if you have any questions, the author answers them in the comments. It's fun and tells the story of a guy being himself. He's just himself, not some cold guy who kills everyone for the lady kind of random cringe with lots of dark thoughts. There is not any filler like in other novels, when there an enemy we don't have to bore through several texts of how some guy fights his zombies. We get to see the outcome. Fun! Keep it succinct!

The author knows how to make his storytelling interesting! I really like reincarnation to the past novels and this story has a potential to compete with the top ranking novels in the future if given the time.
Congrats in advance author!

Hope you will make review on my work called Lumia: Other World.