at chapter 500 and Beyond writing quality is ABSOLUTE TRASH. its all messed up. some chapters repeat one paragraph for the whole chapter and the chapter after theres a something else happening entirely. The writer is dead or something. ditch this Novel.
It started good, but as it goes on the story just plainly went downhill after him having money with his cheat the inconsistency of the mc and also his sister's character is very noticeable. It was introduced that the MC has strong will and drive due to him and her sister growing up as orphans as well as her sister being a considerate person. It just went downhill that after the MC got ample money he just became a beta MC being subjected to the whims of her sister which also became spoiled. Nevertheless it was such a good story but the character development is just.... well whatever good luck
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This is a good read so far, the class he gets is from what I can tell OP but not cheat level, he has to put in a lot of hard work which is nice compared to other instant skill novels, very realistic reactions etc, only thing I don't like is he forgot about his beginner free stay points - _-Other than that small blip it's great, not that many blacksmith novels and this has great potentialDon't drop this or I might cry myself to sleep 😭
It’s a great story and I really enjoyed it. However, I think it should be a bit fast paced in my opinion as if it goes on slowly explaining the world he is currently in like the rest of the novels, it would remove the whole point of him reincarnating in different world after he dies. Moreover, I feel like the author should drop a hint or two in the worlds he’s gonna reincarnate about why him and his friends are going through this reincarnation thing like what’s the whole point other than them becoming stronger, also I feel that a great antogonist should be introduction that’s against them reincarnating.
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