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Story is pretty solid and has potential but pacing is abysmal. Story drags way too much and mc progresses very slowly. Way too much filler rubbish that can be condensed. Feels like a slog way too often

the story definitely has its fun fantasy points but the main issue in my eyes it the translation and lack of editing. When I say this I mean the number in one paragraph will be 5 million, and then 2 sentences later it's 500 million. makes it a bit tiring to read. there also seems to be a bit of nationalism in the book but since it's fantasy and not on earth I didn't care. it's not worth mentioning compared to some books that seem like propaganda. lasty decent fantasy book leaving it at a 3/5 for now; there is a lot of plot holes yet to be filled so it could be a smartly written conclusion that ties it all together, or it could just wrap it up ignoring those holes, time will tell.

A really great story that I have absolutely fallen in love with the character. Not too strong not too weak and a balanced   character. I also like the unique class itself, and would love to see future chapters to the story. Hope you come back soon to update.

Revenge and hate, this is the main theme that author used to write this story. it felt simple and cliche but still interesting. How cliche is it? MC is orphaned and raised by monster, and it killed by human, so he started to hate human and kill them because of it. What make it interesting is how good the execution is. Its not about "look the MC is going to take revenge and start to killing human," but its about "The MC has killed human, so what is the consequence to that child as human? for being a murderer of the same species?"The MC has killed some human, and the family of the human he killed is trying to chase him too. This is where world building and character development works, and author did not disappoint.

I'm just read 8 chapters and totally into this. Though that Pendragon one is an info dumb. Author did a lot of background research to make the story close to the facts. keep it up!!!!!!!

"Kinda. He is extremely capable, but....he doesn't like moving."

"There shouldn't be a problem," I said. "The rules haven't lied yet, which means we already know what will happen."

I found this book on Facebook and absolutely loved it. I wanted to read moreeeI even downloaded the app because of it. I can't wait to finish it