Slowly turning around as a massive shadow cast over them, their legs felt numb. Standing on its hind legs on the beach was a massive dragon. It had been so far away just moments ago, but suddenly it made its appearance, glaring down at the sailors and the frozen prince.
Shinobu accommodated and hissed when Ren lowered his head down. He watched as Ren took him deep and sucked the hell out of him and felt his breath hitched, the muscles in his stomach clenched.
The translation is fine. It's a shame that the story lacks any real depth or substance. There are too many dialogues, and not enough descriptive narration about what is happening. Failure to do so means readers are left wondering about the world-building. It's like mindlessly watching a shuttlecock getting pass from one side of the net to the other. The dialogues are aplenty, but they feel flat and lifeless because there is no distinct characterization. All in all, a horrible piece of fiction that feels like it's written by a teenager. The only reason why I read it was to obtain Fast Pass to unlock chapters. What a waste of my 10 minutes. 1/10
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