3 for writing quality, Some mistakes here and there but not too bad it is average.1 for story development, Same old same old, The plot just keeps on replaying the same tropes. at the start it was good but as you go on and on it becomes shitty.1 for character design, The MC is a massive pushover and has severe brain issues to the point that I think the author has brain issues as well. several other characters are also not on point with their supposed characteristics. Honestly? I think 0 is more appropriate.4 for Update Stability, It has been continuously updating so far.1. World Background, Everyone is dumb, And no one in the story has been very realistic so far. and I just see bullshit flying all over the place.Overall review for my Library, "I'll keep it, to save it for the most extreme circumstances in which I cannot resupply my cultured library with Fanfic or Translated content."
Just a reminderAs there is no translation of the English manual yet, this novel is translated from RAW Chinese directly, if your MTL is still low, I suggest you don't try or you will get a headache. Enjoy Thanks
up to around ch 50 the story was ok then took a nosedive into the trash. early on the mc has a talk with his 300 yo sect master about the concept of cultivation. fee chapters later there are hundreds of people under 20 who are high level cultivators. it's like he started writing a different novel a few chapters in.
From the start, the story already hook my interest. I really like the writing style and narrative is impressive. Looking forward to see the plot of the novel.
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