Rebirth of the Overlord: Conquering the Eternal Kingdom

Shadows could be seen on the six elders' faces. Even though they didn't like Old Devil, the thought of someone from their honorable sect visiting the most famous and popular brothel within a thousand mile radius was a source of great shame. And it wasn't like it was his first time visiting this brothel either. The elders had pent up anger and didn't know how to release it. They could only hope that such a notorious player wouldn't be part of their sect in the future.

" Of course I understand" Dreamy said while laughing at her friend .

"Yeah Kyoka, is Everything alright?" Ochako asked, "Yeah, Nothing's wrong" what the hell is going over me.

It was a cursed ring that made it almost impossible to use mana. There were several of these limiters. These rings were made 200 years ago after the last demon war. At that time some demons were captured to analyze them. In order to render them harmless, the ring was put on. This ring not only reduced the mana but slowly absorbed it until the wearer was unable to use any magic. After some time, these demons were just cripples. The spell on the rings was created by Archmages to avoid possible dangers like these demons. After a few years the use against humans was allowed even if this could mean the crippling of the person. The ring first manifested itself in the finger. But if the curse was in danger, it could be all over the body. Only when the person is dead the curse will be lifted. Each of the five archmages created one of the rings. One of these magicians took his ring and hid it because he could not accept its use against simple people. Soon after, he took his own life before he could be persecuted. However, the ring was later found and handed over to the royal family. Nothing's been heard since. According to the information, the ring dissolves after application in the finger and leaves a seal in the form of a black circle, which dissolved itself after the death of the person.

Oryn looked to her confused, but then realised as she put the sword down and picks up the clothes she used for training.

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

'I have some questions.'

"argo dragon dance" ordered Lawrence

The story is entertaining enough. It's a good read at least and very nice. It is thrilling to read, but at the same time, it has its funny moments. It's an okay read. Though it's clear that the writer has a lot to improve on. Not on the story but on the writing, the way some chapters are written. Overall, it's an alright book. Can't wait to finally find out just who the ML is supposed to be because there are times you're left guessing if it's him or not.

I really liked the use of Grammer and the general setting of the story as well as the plot though I'm struggling with the pronunciation of these names I look forward to future chapters

Absolutely loved it! Sollivan is such a patient and well-crafted protagonist, with promising potential for story development. I felt the story is bit draggy at first but the plot picked up pace and blended beautifully. Do consider keeping the chapters a bit shorter to maintain momentum.Keep going🥰