Meh, super cliché on the first chapter, with super poor editing and translation. Honestly, worse than MTL. At least the editing should be readable no matter how ****ty the story is.The opening is so cliché, on the same bed as engaged famous CEO beauty with 'hidden illness that only Great Me can miraculously cure with BS medical knowledge'. Ignoring the fact that he was transcendental being got ambushed and somehow reincarnate cliché, the outline of the story is quite bleak. What's next? Arrogant young master who despises peasants? Ex-GF who broke up with him for being good-for-nothing? Stupid clan head who knows nothing about stop and reconcile? Unbending police waman who tried to frame MC at everything? Troublesome High schooler? 'Chinese are trash' JP mob? 'We are better' Indian crowd? 'world hegemon' USA? Etc. Etc. Etc. And treasure? 'Oh, I found it accidentally on the flea market' space ring? 'as many as weed' herbs? Notebook talismans? From the techniques, it has to be either "my previous one is good, but...hidden technique that I accidentally found in ancient ruin which I cannot cultivate due to BS" or 'my previous technique is out of imagination cool' Tell me, which one of these are not there?
Translation: 5 starsStory: 4 starsCharacters: 5 stars--------------------------------------Overall: 5 starsAbrupt and obstruse ending leaving most of the storylines unsolved: -4 stars---------------------------------------------------------Final Rating: 1 star
Wonderful writing!I just started reading and I am addicted to it now. Till now I found now grammatical errors and it was smooth. I will continue on reading whis fabulous book. I really liked the way he was protective about Ailena.
Initially i have doubt, i thought the comments is all bias and the novel is not that bad from the synopsis. But all my hope crash down after I read 13 chapter. It's so bad that you want to puke at MC face...
Artorius stared hard at him for a moment, then motioned towards the bodies. "They were attempting to break in to this cell. They are armed and equipped; I believe their goal was to kill this girl."
I jump back into the branches and finally spot some Horned Rabbits. I see 15 of them. They multiplying fast. I jump down and kill two who were at the furthest edge, grab them and leap away before they notice. "Some chow for today."
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