Dalam perjalanan, ardan menyadari bahwa teknologi sudah sangat berubah, sangatlah maju dan cepat, walau dalam hati masih membayangkan bahwa bumi adalah area tertinggal teknologinya, bagaimana lagi dengan ibukota di planet pusat?.
Came from tiktok as a big fan of this guy, read the novel and as a guy who's been writing novels here for almost an year now, I can definitely say this is better than 80% of what this platform has to offer, a very good job at it.Something I would say not as a criticism but as an advice from someone who's experienced on this platform, is the title. It isn't bad. It's actually quite good.Though WN favors clickbait titles like I'm the strongest and others so that's that.Besides that, great job fr
I love it so far. I especially love that the MC is no longer tolerant of those girls. I hope this doesn't change in the future. Dear author, I am begging you for once, don't make the MC go back to any of those devils ever again. They deserve to suffer.
This reminds me of those toxic relationships only those involved cannot see until it completely ruins them. I also like the simplicity of each sentence, makes the story flow in a much better way. Keep it up. Can't wait to see how Helen's story unfolds.
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