Ravens Vol:2

It started good in the first 3 chapters, went very downhill for quite a few chapters, then became pretty good for a while but as of chapter 86 it is just a terrible plot. I read spoiler reviews and nothing they mentioned made me surprised. The author has a hard on for his own people and even if like me you don't particularly care, he'll then send you down one lame plot after another and his MCs seem to always have a unique ability involving entering another world/space but there is always some lame rules/restrictions that are supposed to be a balancing aspect of the ability but doesn't really matter. This novel is possibly much worse than Castle of Black iron but I can't say for sure as I didn't even make it to chapter 300 before all the nonsense just made me lose interest. This story accomplished it much faster.

The premise of this story is halfway decent, the author had some interesting ideas and tried to pull an interesting spin on an old genre.The major problem with this novel is that the author utterly fails to express emotions in a convincing way. The MC feels wooden and constructed because he has either too much emotions or none at all. Side-Characters are a lot better, but not really relevant due to the premise of this story.World building is okay-is, not good, but vague enough to be believable. Differences in planets are almost nonexistent, but again, this isn't a slice of life or exploration type of story. Pasing is another problem, we either get way to much information about things we don't need to care about at all, or not enough to really imagine what is going on.

The idea is kinda interesting and good but the author failed tl create real characters since they all feel unrealistic and dumb.I read until chapter 19, i will continue until 40 to see if it changes

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A pretty good light read when you want time away from the hard read. I wish for 1000 more chapters. Author really nice novel a lot of things I would have done the same and a lot of things I would have done differently, but overall it is amazing.

Nice and refreshing. Very well written, my only regret is that are too few chapters. I love this novel. My language is not English so my comment is short but u did a great job author.

It's a very interesting read for sure. I would totally recommend this to anyone. The author has done a great job at writing the story and though the prose could use some editing, the overall plot and characters are amazing.

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