kang opened the bathroom door but the light was dim and cold, after reliving him shelf, he turn and ask li na why the bathroom was cold and the light dim.
"That 'guy' you just saw is his majesty Shirou Kira Clover I. He is the prince and next ruler of the nation. He is not someone that anyone can get close to." Klaus said. He was quite elitist even though he was capable of seeing those from lower birth as equals and respect them, it was only after they proved themselves as someone who deserved to be treated as such.
I read the first 3 chapters but I introduced myself because this book just isn't for me but anyway you have a review of those first three chapters:The biggest flaw in novel is its failure to balance its elements. The writing swings between melodrama, forced action, and unearned moments of character introspection. The protagonist is a cardboard cut-out who reacts to events rather than actively engaging with them. There’s little sense of growth or change in him, and the story feels more like a string of random survival tropes rather than a cohesive narrative. The attempt at worldbuilding, with mysterious runes and a “magnetic dagger,” lacks any real substance and reads like a lazy attempt to create intrigue without earning it.If you’re looking for a well-crafted survival story with meaningful character development, emotional depth, and a compelling plot, this novel isn’t it. The emotional moments are clumsy, the action is lackluster, and the worldbuilding is shallow. This story needs a lot more focus, and a lot less melodrama, to become the kind of survival adventure it aspires to be.Anyway, for the author, don't take this review badly but as an example to improve, and I don't want to be too mean to the author so I'm giving it a 4⭐ and hope it gets better.
A very nice wish fulfilment type novel ...and the system is very generous . not too overboard right off the start ..he has to work to get it ,but the rewards r generous. can't get enough of this .more chapters!!!!!!!!
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