Quantum Hongjun: The Mechanical Mountain and Sea Era

It is a pretty well written story. Thought out and planned well. The spelling and sentences are improving as chapters go on. Currently on chapter 56 so got a while to give my full thoughts yet only getting a few passes a day.

Up to chapter 20.Absolute treasure. Not to mention the good story, thr translator's notes which are almost extinct on this site are there. There is a real translator and a good one at that. The story is also great so far. Mc is the most realist writer-turn-transmigrator so far. I won't spoil anything. Better read it yourself.

I've seen some CNs like this, but never a fantasy setting. I hope its good but the summary doesn't give me much hope. For all I know, it'll be Polygamy and so-called rejections will be irrelevant. If so then it's really stupid.

Read up to chapter 15, normally I don't quit so early but the MC is just annoying. Acting like he is at the pinnacle when he is only at the starting line. Doesn't matter if he has all this knowledge, if you are a small fish acting like a shark in a big pond, well you should get eaten for your efforts. Not smart story telling, more like this guy is living through his own dreamscape.

another novel copied from somewhere.                                                                                                                           

A thrilling, gripping story! The author has a firm grasp on the kind of language that makes a reader really invest themselves emotionally in the story, and the characters are so lifelike, you'll think that you truly know them. There is a certain witty approch in the writing and the style that hooked me from the very first sentences. 5/5 would recommend!

It's Good... That's it.Nah, I'm just joking... The world building here is amazing, yup, really! especially when the author adds up engineering on his fantasy world. But I found something that turns me down :< The *** jokes are being abused here too much, and I know the author even said that he wanted this novel to be comedic, but it isn't essentially needed to be *** jokes right? it's okay to touch it on and I gotta admit that at first, It was amusing and hilarious but, as time goes by it became toxic to the story to the point that I skip chapters. (Not only that, I am a bit skeptical of the author. Well, you see, he clearly shows his fetishes on as* l*cking, and those big racks of his characters in the story, some *** jokes is a bit too much. In short, I don't want to offend the author but his writing shows his sexual desires, making me think that the author is a single who has not experienced real relationships... Please, author, don't get offended >.<) And that's not only the reason why I skip chapters. Some chapters are not that necessary to the story honestly, an example of this is the longest school entrance arc that I had ever read, yes the point of this is to add more and expand plot lines but man. Well, the start gets me hyped because of the uniqueness of the story, and I don't want review it fully because the story clearly isn't in the climax yet. But I do hope that the author improves the things that I've pointed out. it'll make the story enjoyable to read.There are many potentials in this story, I'm a writer too not here but on Royal Road... I am the same as the author who wants to improve English (well I want to improve my English grammar) and share our fantasy to inspire others. There are still good and fun or positive things about this novel, and there's a lot! my stars wouldn't be 4 if it isn't that great, right? But, fellow author, keeeeeep up the good work! and continue to inspire others!

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