Puzzle in Cosmology

not worth the read. The grammar and spelling is horrible and, shows no sign of changing or editing. It is this low level of quality that makes me avoid most new works that look great in the narrative but is destroyed by unprofessionalism.The background was not bad but is very hard to comprehend some times. it might get better, but it simply couldn't overcome the lack of care exhibited in the writing.Hopefully, this story will be revised in the future.

one of the most terrible first volumes I have ever seen. The writng is utter trash. the chapters are long and dull. The plot is slow moving. This story will never be a 5 star for that reason alone.Now. With that said. It does get better. A lot better. I was confused by all the 5star reviews until I got towards the end of volume 1. It is litrrally a 100x better. Volume 2 has made me laugh, cringe, and actually feel for these charcters. Yeah there were some bad moments in volume 2 but it is far from done. If you want my advice. Skim volume 1 and juts get the basic plot. Or at least skip to the end. Volume 2 is when this story realy does get good.Now there are some unforcunate choices in volume 1 that just break the story. Namely Hero's arc in volume 1. I do love his mini arc in volume 2 but it really makes no sense when you read volume1. honestly the two volumes feel like they were written by two diffrent people. 1 is mega dull, and 2 is just great with only a few sour moments. the story on its own isn't really bad I guess. some nice powerss here and there. some cool monsters there. It just needs a way better begining.

Read up to pay for view chapters and dont want to download the app.So the review is up to chapter 44 and the score is based on a novel that wants to earn money. (Its a harsher score then some first time novel writers or fanfics.)Writing 4: No glaring mistakes found here. No big grammar mistakes and the sentences flow. It is written as a very light read. Stability 3: i checked and it isn't very stable. It is released around every 2 to 4 days but you wil be left uncertain exactly how many days there is between each chapter.Story 2: Very old man reincarnates and becomes OP. That is basicly the story. Where i got at chapter 44 you learn a little more and a big plot or arc seems to be coming but for the first 44 chapters there is none.Character 2: The mc is either mentally handicapped or the author has failed in his mission to write about someone who is 80+. The mc sounds more like a 15 to 20 years old who got reincarnated but if he was then all his previous life skill would make no sense. As such i believe the author wrote him as old. The parents are very accepting of everything around the mc to a fault. Furthermore the 3 females introduced are like most harem novels, just plain dumb when it involves the mc.Background 4: Actually enjoy the background and the abilities sounds nice.I do recommend to give it a try if you like a read where it doesnt go in depth. It's good for your casual i dont want to think and just read moments.

A sequel to tang san ,which shows the development of the cultivation system, its changes and to leading to a bad ass mc. Later they too become idols for the third books mc.

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Writing this review with 41 ch read so take that into account.Where you ever frustated, that main character is waiting for power up at least 20 ch or more? Well based on what i read so far, this novel for you. I already fall in love with the whole power system, main character and even some side characters(which is very rare). I can´t say this confidently but so far, this is at the top when you are looking for tags as: game system, magic, frindship or bit of comedy :)

<p>Xue Mingtao was still working at the office. Gu Yanzhi had mysteriously gone overseas. And Gao Lang was on his duty in the security office, the thought of getting his end-of-the-year bonus making him content.</p>

Well, I read it raw up 1400 and cursed every , damn stupid drama like, I love u but will act like hate u...which leads to 3000 chapters of misunderstandings and chase... very disappointed