Pretty Little Fulang

"If you don't eat...you won't get the dessert i made...."

this novel is utterly tantalizing.Men of culture, rally behind me as we conquer the unknown depths.Of course this is all for research purposes.

This is too stupid!!! Mc has 2 systems and one of them is given by gods called Heavenly system(HS)...and guess what, its's down right terrible!!! Mc is forced to become a villain and if he treats any one positively, even his family in the starting(even though only once), he gets tortured by HS...his memory is sealed by HS and has no free will...he is a literal dog on a leash and if he tries to create a positive image, you know what happens...the bastard author's so called created gods force frame mc to be evil in front of everyone and still sacrifice himself for them in the end...Why not make him a puppet???He is literally a pseudo puppet already...Gods don't force someone to be evil you brain dead author, if thats the case then humans would not have inherent cruelty in them, all you have to do is fan the flames and watch the world burn, hell just give them a little power with no backlash and thats it for fucks sake...you want mc to gain our sympathy but you should better find friends dude, you are wasting your life there by leeching off sympathy from newbie readers.

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Really great start. Has Potential 😁.         

Shameless author 5 star review :DIt's my first try writing a novel, hope y'all enjoy it

I thought I wouldn't enjoy it but I was preety good. 👍👍

this is great but work more on the emotions ❤️