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As he watched the sword Shusuke felt like an insignificant ant . The huge shadow of the sword felt like it would cut through anything that came before it even the sky . As Shusuke continued watching he felt fear , deep fear and despair by the second but there was nothing he could do to escape from it .What Shusuke can do was stand at the same place and wait for the judgement of God of death .
It’s better than I expected. The first few chapters are a little rougher but I love the story so far This max reminds me of a more likable Jonathan and a overall better mc.
Not bad. A few English mistakes, but compared to some other works, this is excellent. The writing sttle itself is not my cup of tea, but it's well done.Reasonable development, with good characters and world building.I won’t keep reading because it’s not my cup of tea, but from a technical standpoint it’s hard to find things to criticize here.Keep up the good job, author!!
Hi author here with a shameless review.I want to say several things, so let's go slowly.About the writing quality, I'm going to be honest here, it's not the best and isn't near since I'm not that good at English, but I'm trying, so bear with it until either I get better or I can pay a grammar checker.The story development, I'm trying to make it slow, not too much, but slow, so I don't know how that will end.The character design, it gets better (I think) around the chapter 11, so if you can pass the first ones, it will improve (a little, don't know in the future how it will be).The updating stability, I'm gonna be straight honest, it's awful. Since I'm a student with a quite strict school, I have lots of exams, so I have to study, and also this is a hobby, so I have other priorities. If you can understand that, I thank you, if you can't, I can't do nothing about it.And finally, the world background, there isn't too much right now, and probably it won't be too complex in the future, since I'm very clueless.If after all that negative things I said about my book (I now realize this doesn't help at all) you still want to read it and actually read it, I welcome you to this adventure that I don't know where will take us.(Pss, also join the discord, so we can chat and hear me ramble.)
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