Power vs Love

the book is really nice,one of the first books that I read and I'll never forget the sensation I was feeling while reading.It was awesome👌.

With regards to my personal opinion, the start of this novel is very interesting because of how awesome the mc is, and how cool the face smacking plots are. But the moment you realize that the whole novel is just an endless cycle of face smacking, you will get use to the awesomeness of the story, and all excitement and anticipations that you have when you started reading this novel will be lost.

I like how the story develop but the world background rather poor, its kinda unique novel for me because this is someone who are transmigration to many world

Do you guys have any idea if this is harem or not?............... .......................................🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂..

Hi author here with a shameless review.I want to say several things, so let's go slowly.About the writing quality, I'm going to be honest here, it's not the best and isn't near since I'm not that good at English, but I'm trying, so bear with it until either I get better or I can pay a grammar checker.The story development, I'm trying to make it slow, not too much, but slow, so I don't know how that will end.The character design, it gets better (I think) around the chapter 11, so if you can pass the first ones, it will improve (a little, don't know in the future how it will be).The updating stability, I'm gonna be straight honest, it's awful. Since I'm a student with a quite strict school, I have lots of exams, so I have to study, and also this is a hobby, so I have other priorities. If you can understand that, I thank you, if you can't, I can't do nothing about it.And finally, the world background, there isn't too much right now, and probably it won't be too complex in the future, since I'm very clueless.If after all that negative things I said about my book (I now realize this doesn't help at all) you still want to read it and actually read it, I welcome you to this adventure that I don't know where will take us.(Pss, also join the discord, so we can chat and hear me ramble.)

It seems like a good story, is it the kind of growth of the kingdom and recruitment of survivors while getting rich and having a harem? If so, there is still no indication of that. it seems to be slow growing the story so far is just the mc and the robots and it seems like there is only desert on the other side of the door.

Not bad. A few English mistakes, but compared to some other works, this is excellent. The writing sttle itself is not my cup of tea, but it's well done.Reasonable development, with good characters and world building.I won’t keep reading because it’s not my cup of tea, but from a technical standpoint it’s hard to find things to criticize here.Keep up the good job, author!!

It’s better than I expected. The first few chapters are a little rougher but I love the story so far This max reminds me of a more likable Jonathan and a overall better mc.