The start is okay but I do strongly dislike when the system kind of has a mind of its own and is rude, for example; In this novel, when the MC gets the system, the system keeps calling him "stupid" or "idiot". Although the MC isn't exactly smart, the system shouldn't have that big of an opinion that it needs to constantly voice how stipid he is and just explain it instead.
It's a pretty interesting novel with a concept that i recently saw in Slime Anime. The mc's character seems subpar but I am willing to give it a chance.
Very good for now, just hoping he won't become the cliche beta male. For now it doesn't seem like it, even though the author coincidentally managed to kill both of the guys from the other group lol.Waiting eagerly to see more!
Keep it up. ... the story is going great and i hope that you keep writing at this pace.... .Ig you want it as a long term story as per you mentioned. . don't worry I will give you my power stones.
<p>Ariana made contact with his gaze and refused to let the issue go but Edlyn's trembling body made her give up the fight today. The Headmaster and Gregory walked by the girls slowly. Ariana bit down on her tongue, stopping herself from saying something and waited until they could no longer hear their footsteps echoing within the building. Ariana quickly broke out of Edlyn's embrace and rushed over to the young man, named Cayden.</p>
"red eye Boar martial spirit of middle grade" the mayor announced the chubby martial spirit while place the sphere in front of the chubby kid, the chubby kid place his hand above the sphere, seconds later 8 light flew out from the sphere with intense bright
As fast as it extends, the blade of his sword immediately reverted back to its original size. The little girl was still running but the huge snake behind her stopped moving. At the center of its head was a thin red line. After several seconds a gush of blood came out from the red line and the three eyes of the snake slowly close. Its huge body fall down the ground and it was not moving. The attack was so fast that the snake didn't even know how it died.
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