After the three of them had left, all the people had already determined the top 3 winners, because the only people left in line were people who were not well-known in Kargath Academy. Their powers were all only primary or mid Saint levels, and there was, naturally, no way they could compare to the other three.
- Na primeira fase, apenas 3 pokémons serão usados, sendo obrigatório o uso do Bellsprout, na segunda serão 4, na terceira 5 e na última 6 pokemons, então vamos começar a primeira batalha, fiquem apenas o 1 e 2 - Disse o monge se sentando em sua cadeira.
Good writing style, and interesting story. But maybe you can more elaborate Carmila's revenge in prologue/chapter 1. In addition, don't forget a hook so the readers will be curious about the next chapter.
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