Plague Of Shadows

He went to rip his shirt off to see his Falna. He needed to know… was he a possessor of a unique skill? He needed to know… his mistress had shown interest on the boy and he showed promise.

"Okay whatever. By the way, dad ordered me to visit you for whatever reason. Since it's afternoon, don't you want to have afternoon tea? Well that is if you're not busy. I was getting bored staying here." I said. His scent is so masculine that every girl would want to smell.

By that time, they had reloaded. I tried to speak to them in German, but all that came out was a jumbled mess, and then they unloaded into me again (I'm really getting tired of this shit), but nothing happened this time.

I looked behind me. To the left of the brown door was a long shuttered window. Iwalked to it, stood in front of it, and turned around. In daylight, I thought, you could seeto the postoffice corner.

blocking chapters already...............

though the novel is very engaging there are many errors

The beginning had its issues- mostly writing. But as we move on it becomes much better, although a small tip I'll give author is that when writing dialogue try to flesh out exposition more to make it more interesting (use the pope in pool method haha).Author also needs to publish stably! It's very important, at least three chaps a week for the readers! Please be steady, author.Story development is going smoothly. No erraticness and character design is as interesting as it gets, without spoiling anything, each has there unique traits that draws you in.The world background is immersive, if you read game novels then you probably know better but I don't read them. Despite that, to me, the world background is striking enough to leave a memorable impact. So idk the standards since I don't read game novels but to me this is nice.In total, its an good novel, improvements will make it even better, its still in its early stage with lots of potential after all! Keep improving in writing quality author as well as uploading streak, stop taking so much time to upload~.

After 84 years of waiting......Peak is finally back!!

Keep going.....good story and good chapter 1❤️